Not of this world

Thanks to Roschelle Wisoff-Fields for hosting Friday Fictioneers. I appreciate all your effort.
Write a story 100 words or less using a picture 


How annoying the musicians are as they swagger into the courtyard. Do they think they are gods? Well, I’ve seen a god and he didn’t play an instrument like that.

When he played an instrument it was like heaven opened up and the world stood still. His smile was confident & good-humored. His forehead puckered in concentration. I couldn’t move or talk while he played. I was transfixed by the pure emotion that came from his instrument. When his eyes met mine, they were an unnatural green. I knew then that he was not of this world.


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5 Responses to Not of this world

  1. micklively says:

    You’ve heard Clapton? 😉

  2. Aliens are the best brass players

  3. I love the words pucker and swagger. I’ve known men like that. Like how spare you said all that. Not easy to be so compelling so briefly.

  4. dmmacilroy says:

    Music heard at the crossroads perhaps. A delightful tale.



  5. Nan Falkner says:

    Good story with well placed words and imagery. Thanks! Nan

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